Trying to write a book. Read my prolouge?

You're right- lots of spelling and grammatical errors-- but... I like it. :) I love the description and imagery, I feel like I can really see this playing out in my mind. I am also very intrigued-- which is good. With alot of stories, I am not hooked soon enough to really care enough to read it, but with this I was hooked. My suggestion to you is to not post this on YA! but post it on a site like a href="http://www.worthyofpublishing.com" rel="nofollow"http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/a where it is copyrighted and no one can steal it, yet you can still get feedback. Good luck, and keep writing!